Closed Crib

Closed Crib

A Poem by CallieWVU2
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In Poetry 101 we were told to write and narrate a poem in the voice of inanimate object, this is my finished product.

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They placed him inside of me.
Some cried
Others secretly wondered if the dead
Had a smell that would never wash off.
The suit was designer and black.
Its fibers scratched against my inner silken sides.
 
He was young and carried no bruises,
There were no tears in his skin.
Corners of each lip were turned upwards
But this was not the face he wore
The last second he had the chance to breathe,
Someone had molded it to look this way,
Dead skin like putty in someone’s hand.
 
They had shut his eyes because the blueness held
To its terror.
And no one came to see his death
They had come to watch him sleep.
 
And when they closed me over him
They carried us together as if I was
The mother and he the unborn child in my womb,
A voice could be heard, diligently, reciting words.
 
Finally we were lowered
Feet
Upon
Feet
Dark earth all around us.
 
And as we settled to the bottom the jolt
Of my form hitting the ground
Caused his lids to open
And now his blue eyes
Stare up at me.

© 2009 CallieWVU2


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CallieWVU2
CallieWVU2

Morgantown, WV



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Graduate of West Virginia University, always a Mountaineer, newly 31, currently looking for representation for my novel The Great American more..

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