The Path

A simple, hopeful poem

The path of rejection

  can lead to inspiration.

 

The path of darkness

  can lead to light.

 

The path of betrayal

  can lead to forgiveness.

 

The path of loss

  can lead to new life.

Reviews

[Neon]

"The path of loss can lead to new life." ... Yeah, I do agree with yer this line. Life gives everything but it takes away it from us at the same time ... so, profit and loss're the keys of cool life .. If we gain today something then one day we're gonnna loose ... like God made us and one day he'll call us back to the heaven to let the new one survive ... So, this's a chain of life .... but it's true that loss always lead to a new life... If we do love then one day love's gonna rip our heart off hardly with the pain because today we gain love and tom. we've to loose it because "starting and ending" ... these're the two poles of life... life's based on it. Nice work, I really enjoyed yer this short write, it's cool. Keep writing dear, Dawny.

[Calissa Knox]

Very true. Thank you so much! You keep writing as well, Neon!

[Neon]

Thanks dear, Dawny for appreciating my words. Your damn cool ever and you've always been supportive :)

[Calissa Knox]

You're welcome. :) And thank you! You too, and you're really cool, too, Neon. :)

[A]

Simplicity is so hard to achieve specially when dealing with complex themes.
When you can identify what is superfluous and take it all out only truth remains, right?
Thank you for doing it so beautifully.

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this.

[RavingMad]

Another incredibly profound poem! Wow!

I like the way you formatted it, too. What I get from the format (meaning the indentation) is that, just because you’ve been down a certain “path”, doesn’t mean you have to continue in that direction. Anyway, it’s obvious, but no less true :)

I just love how your style seems to be short and to the point (at least for the poems that I’ve reviewed so far). I think for this poem especially it really works, so kudos :) For me it’s like saying, yes, you’ve gone through some rough stuff, but it’ll lead to better things, so there’s no need to overcomplicate everything. Just accept it and be thankful for the good to come :)

Just great! I’m subscribing! haha

[Calissa Knox]

I'm so glad this poem could inspire you! Thank you very much for the review, and for subscribing to my writing! I really do appreciate your encouraging words. :)

[RavingMad]

You're very welcome! And I mean ever single word of encouragement so keep being awesome! :D

[RavingMad]

*every word - sorry XP

[Calissa Knox]

I truly appreciate it! Thank you! :D

[Dr. Wood ?]

and the moral is to be positive....Every coin has two sides, keep flipping,,,nice poem

[Calissa Knox]

Yes, that is very true. Thanks for the review!

This little poem is perfect, it doesn't need more, you've said all that I had in mind today....

Life and death can be so full of lovely contradictions, and you paint them....
The one can't be without the other, and there is beauty in everything we embrace....

Your quill tonight made me smile, and happy. Thank you my friend.

- Elisa

[Jack...]

This was the perfect little poem. Few words, big message and all of it so wonderfully true. Very nicely done.

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you very much! I appreciate your encouraging review!