Ocean of Emotion

A poem I wrote about getting lost in music.

I am sinking in a never ending ocean - 

The never ending ocean of emotion.

I sink deeper and deeper,

the world is fading like a dream.

I close my eyes in wonder, 

forgetting my reality.

I am letting myself drown in the ocean of emotion.

I have never ever felt so alive.

Reviews

[Aaron the Baron]

Sometimes you FEEL so deeply, that you are surrounded by it with no way out. It's like being awake from a thousand year dream. Like when you lose someone, you feel empty. Then after a while you start to feel again, and it feels like you have never felt before.

[Calissa Knox]

Very true.

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is both beautiful and poignant. The way you describe your emotions is both vivid and poetic. Your use of imagery and metaphor is particularly effective, and it helps to create a sense of wonder and introspection in the reader. I think that your poem is a testament to the power of art to help us process our emotions and connect with others.

[Maskedthoughts]

I love how your poem was short yet it contained so munched motion and imagery. It went beyond the words to a deeper level, I can also relate to it a lot. Great job!

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you very much!

[Chris]

The intensity of some things never fades - just grows and grows. It IS awesome when you find it.

[Calissa Knox]

Yes, it definitely is. Thanks for the review!

[Chris]

anytime...

[Neon]

Very nice artistry. I felt the depth of the piece.... emotions're poured into words.. into the piece. Keep on.

[Calissa Knox]

Thanks for your encouraging review!

[Neon]

Welcome.. by the way, Me too love music much.

[Calissa Knox]

That's great! Do you play music?

[Neon]

I loved that you too love music, I read yer profile that's very great you're very talented and even me too always in a search of new artistry....

Well .. I do write songs .. I've also uploaded some of my songs on the site. How about you?

[Calissa Knox]

Yes, I'm a pianist/composer. I'll be releasing a new album soon. It's wonderful that you have music in your heart as well. I would love to hear your music sometime!

[Neon]

Great .. Am a artist too .. well, i draw sketches .. nice to hear .. may i ask, what's a name of yer new album???

Yeh, thanks .. well, many writers who read my songs review me and say, i should upload here my music too but i didn't find it's a cool site to upload .. it's a writing site not a composing one .. isn't it ??? and yet i do write songs .. well , am honored to hear your words, you wished to hear my music .. thanks for encouraging me to write more and more songs and your words now motivate me composing some musics too .. thanks, Dawny.

[Calissa Knox]

Yes it is a writing site. I will definitely read your songs then. :) The name of my new album is Forgotten Road.

[Neon]

Thanks, Dawny ... am honored to hear the words. Well .. sounds great.. your album name's cool, I loved the title .. me too would love to listen to your album .. do you upload it on any site?

[Calissa Knox]

You're very welcome. :) My website is CalissaKnox.com. There are a few of my songs on there.

[Neon]

Thanks again for letting me know the site .. I'd surely take a look on that site. So .. for how long your on this cafe's site?

[Calissa Knox]

A little over a week. Would you like to talk through messaging?

[Neon]

Ok.. well i asked cos, me too just here only for a month ... oh yeh sure, why not ... sorry for stretchin' your this convo.

[Calissa Knox]

I enjoy talking to you!

[Neon]

Me too love talking to good people. Thanks for being nice.

[Calissa Knox]

No problem, Neon! :)

[Dominic Shaya]

I like the sudden change of contrast.....'but I like it' works

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you, Dominic.

[K]

I am not good at reviewing poems, as I am just a beginner.
But the title of the poem itself is unique that it couldn't stop myself from reading it.
So here I am, it was truly amazing. Short but powerful. Excellent piece of writing.

[Calissa Knox]

Thanks for taking the time to read. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate the review!

[K]

You are welcome. :)

[Sami Khalil]

A sinking feeling indeed forgetting our reality ...A well written poem...:).....................

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you very much!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................