Love is pain but pain isn't love

I haven't written a Poem in a long while but I wrote this because it was what I happened to be feeling at the moment. I wrote it as soon as it came to my head. Looking back on it now it really sounds silly but maybe someone will like it. The picture is re

I can't believe this, it can't be happening
Her pain grows in my heart
I can't believe the sudden agony
Her hate is boiling my blood.
Save my soul, speak my sins. Live the crimes that I never commit
See my love? It's all dream within a nightmare, within a night.
double-layer, silent, and still
Her love is changing me, warping, disfigure me, killing me!
It's so heavy. Her kiss is chilling to the bone.
Sudden clarity, wanting to hide inside my hole.
Feeling me, are you feeling me?
Feeling you, are you feeling me?
Needing me, loving me and feeling me, through feelings and emotions
Your idol is no longer afraid.
Deceiving me, are you leading me to graves of faces I've never known
Trick the silence and brew the storm.
Killing me.
Cut the love and burn the shame
Love is ten times worst than pain
A thousand times worst than death
And a million times colder
  But infinitely Sweeter

Author's Note

Tell me what you think. I know I used a few words way to much but I just typed them as they came.

Reviews

[Scarlet Alice]

really dark vibes in your poem. your words are deep but I manage to get the message at the end... I guess :) anyway I saw your account and I'm an anime fan too :)

[Lilia]

I love those kind of writings, the kind where you just start going and don't stop. It seems so raw and emotional, which in my mind is what true writing is. Even if the grammar isn't correct, even if words are over used, even if things are misplaced, it's you. Truly you. Wonderful writing.