The World is a Sunset

Wispy shapeless clouds,
Grey, blue and gold,
Contrast with the mountains,
Outlined black and bold.

Golden treasure is hiding,
Behind the magical mist,
Blue clouds are tinged with purple,
Where heavens light has kissed.

The sky is turning precious,
Diamonds are sparkling snow,
Clouds are like golden ships,
With the dark of night in tow.

The gold is being buried,
Now silver will come out,
The moon will shed its light,
On all the world about.

But without moon or sun,
The world is still a jewel,
So treat it like you should,
Don't look past like a fool.

The world is a sunset,
It's beauty will not last,
So we should stop and look,
At the golden light it casts.

Author's Note

I wrote this for nature, and for the setting sun on my lined paper.

Reviews

[The Girl That Let You G..]

This is a beautiful write. The imagery is crystal clear and dreamlike. Fine work

[Calibaster]

Thanks!

[LunarSong]

Beautiful! I love it... you should try to get some of them published!

[Calibaster]

thanks!

[C.C. Marx]

Absolutely amazing the detail here is so.......well.....ummm.......*looks in compliment book* fantabulicious

[Farrsight]

*Clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap* Good. Really breathtaking.

[Calibaster]

thanks.

[BrinaMarie]

Gorgeous. The rhyming is just perfect, and the imagery is fantastic.

[Calibaster]

Ha ha ha! Thank you!

[Dearantlers]

WOW! THAT IS AMAZING!!!!!!! I think thats one of your best poems yet! Keep writing these awesome poems, and I will keep reading them! As long as you tell me in computer tech. :)

[Calibaster]

Thanks.