Clouds

I wrote this for fun!

Growing grey clouds,
Rain pouring down,
Lightning strikes,
Thunder resounds,
Golden light breaks,
The barrier of grey,
Pure ray of hope,
Light of God's day.

Author's Note

I know, it's short. But I found it fun to write! please comment!

Reviews

[BrinaMarie]

So amazingly simple, yet sophisticated in word and rhyme. And the rhyme pattern itself is interesting in the way it flows, in a good way. Amazing.

[Calibaster]

I don't think it's quite THAT good, ... but you can believe that if you want to ;)

[Mirabella]

Amazing! It's like, you wrote it so simply, but yet it is so creative and pretty. It also flows very well.
xx

[Calibaster]

thank you!

[Dearantlers]

How do you write so well? Would you be willing to give me some of your awesome talent? PLEASE????? With a puppy dog face? I like this poem cause its short, sweet and to the point. Not that I don't like your long ones :) but this is really good!