Clouds

I wrote this for fun!

Growing grey clouds,
Rain pouring down,
Lightning strikes,
Thunder resounds,
Golden light breaks,
The barrier of grey,
Pure ray of hope,
Light of God's day.

Author's Note

I know, it's short. But I found it fun to write! please comment!

Reviews

[LunarSong]

How is it that you wrote this four years ago and that my comment was so short? This is absolutely beautiful. I'm so sending it to you. Why haven't you written any poems recently?

[seraphicAlisah]

I wrote short poems too and I do believe that short poems are way too better than the long ones.
Short poems are very straight forward. Less words but more meanings.
Like this one! It simply tells your point.

:)

[Calibaster]

Thank you! I totally agree!!! :) ;)

[wordwarrior]

Well it's just gorgeous! You may have written it for fun, but the message is wonderful, the flow excellent.
Brief, simple and with such depth.
Lovely indeed!

[Calibaster]

Thank You!

[G.A. Collins]

Short. Simple. Sweet.

All the best qualities of fine poetry.

[Calibaster]

Thanks! :)

[Hannah Grabarkewitz]

It's Fun to read! This poem is short but definitely powerful!

[Calibaster]

Thank you!

[Becca Bishop]

Every once in a while you come across a poem that's pure awesomeness and then you shout: "OH MY GOSH THIS POEM IS PURE AWESOMENESS!!!!"
That's what I just did. My mom's not very pleased with me :P
This is beautiful and amazing and...beautiful...I'm really bad at adjectives....

[Calibaster]

That's ok! Thanks!!! I didn't think it was that great!

[Starscraper]

I like it. Great description!

[Calibaster]

thanks!

[Starscraper]

You're welcome!

[LunarSong]

It's pretty. :)

[Calibaster]

pretty short. but thanks:)

[CHRIS ANDES]

yeah, i know that feeling when you really need to write something
you don't know why
=]

[Farrsight]

Short.