Autumn Night

I was outside at night, and i just wanted to freeze that moment in time, sooo ... here it is.

Colors amassed,

brightly contrast,

that shape so vast,

looming above.

Leaves fall like tears,

waking the fears,

dormant for years,

childlike thereof.

Moon shines so bright,

shedding its light,

o'er the cool night,

white like a dove.

Shimmering crowds,

hidden by clouds,

acting as shrouds,

or silver gloves.

Twinkles are gone,

as dewy dawn,

climbs ever on,

natures pure love.

Author's Note

Just tell me what you think. Please.

Reviews

[FrancescaX]

You like Nature! There are so many moments in life that i just want to freeze, so many times i want to capture the beauty around me but i cant. Words help just like you did fantastically well, in your poem. God is the most amazing artist and i am grateful that people like you can express that beauty with good poems.

[Calibaster]

Thank you sooooo much!

[FrancescaX]

you are welcome. keep it up.

[Calibaster]

I will certainly try! ;)

[Maan]

The flow of your poem is really soothing, you wanted to freeze the moment, so I tell you that you've done it perfectly as I can imagine myself in that moment too. Use of rhymes is good in fact very good. :)

[Dearantlers]

Awesome poem Alverrann! You have got some major talent. Could I borrow some of it for a week or so? I love your rhyming scheme! That's pretty darn awesome that you can rhyme words so well! I agree with LunarSong, you have to love fall, even if it is rainy and cold. It sure is a beautiful season!

[LunarSong]

I love it! Mmmm.... don't you just love the fall? Perhaps I'm weird, but walking to seminary it was raining and kinda cold, and I was so happy! I love when you compared the leaves falling with tears!

[Calibaster]

thanks!

[LunarSong]

you're welcome