Is She Joking?

Is She Joking?

A Poem by Erica Daubert

My angel and my devil

(on either shoulder)

take nights off to get

drunk and play poker

so I can be a revelation

of guilt-free sarcasm

through written word

and half a laugh.

© 2015 Erica Daubert


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Dear Erica,

"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"

A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".

Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.

Very best regards,

Rick

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Dear Erica,

"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"

A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".

Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.

Very best regards,

Rick

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting, inspiring, good truth spoken, bit of humor... nice and short, and says enough with a meaning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

loved this it made me laugh
nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago


AWESOME.

I love this imagination and it coolness....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like truths in short spurts...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The last line is perfect. I enjoy the shortness of the whole piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awe-some

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol...this is cute , funny but real...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short but inspiring, and left me with a smile. Always nice to have a moment of quiet to reflect on the frantic things around us. Brilliant

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And when the demons allow a moment of repsite, we can try to gather a thought or two lol
Beautifully thought through love, clever piece of concise impact!
xoxo

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Erica Daubert
Erica Daubert

Philadelphia, PA



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Erica Daubert is a Philadelphia-area singer-songwriter, composer and multi-instrumentalist. Born and raised in South Jersey, she was heavily influenced by her grandfather, frontman and guitarist for .. more..

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