Is She Joking?
A Poem by
Erica Daubert
My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)
take nights off to get
drunk and play poker
so I can be a revelation
of guilt-free sarcasm
through written word
and half a laugh.
© 2015 Erica Daubert
Featured Review
Dear Erica,
"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"
A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".
Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.
Very best regards,
Rick
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Dear Erica,
"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"
A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".
Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.
Very best regards,
Rick
Posted 13 Years Ago
Dear Erica,
"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"
A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".
Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.
Very best regards,
Rick
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Interesting, inspiring, good truth spoken, bit of humor... nice and short, and says enough with a meaning.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Interesting, inspiring, good truth spoken, bit of humor... nice and short, and says enough with a meaning.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
loved this it made me laugh
nice work
Posted 13 Years Ago
loved this it made me laugh
nice work
AWESOME.
I love this imagination and it coolness....
Posted 13 Years Ago
AWESOME.
I love this imagination and it coolness....
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like truths in short spurts...
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like truths in short spurts...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
The last line is perfect. I enjoy the shortness of the whole piece.
Posted 13 Years Ago
The last line is perfect. I enjoy the shortness of the whole piece.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
awe-some
Posted 13 Years Ago
awe-some
lol...this is cute , funny but real...
Posted 13 Years Ago
lol...this is cute , funny but real...
Short but inspiring, and left me with a smile. Always nice to have a moment of quiet to reflect on the frantic things around us. Brilliant
Posted 13 Years Ago
Short but inspiring, and left me with a smile. Always nice to have a moment of quiet to reflect on the frantic things around us. Brilliant
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
And when the demons allow a moment of repsite, we can try to gather a thought or two lol
Beautifully thought through love, clever piece of concise impact!
xoxo
Posted 13 Years Ago
And when the demons allow a moment of repsite, we can try to gather a thought or two lol
Beautifully thought through love, clever piece of concise impact!
xoxo
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on October 27, 2011
Last Updated on November 2, 2015
Author
Erica Daubert Philadelphia, PA
About
Erica Daubert is a Philadelphia-area singer-songwriter, composer and multi-instrumentalist. Born and raised in South Jersey, she was heavily influenced by her grandfather, frontman and guitarist for ..
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