Is She Joking?

Is She Joking?

A Poem by Erica Daubert

My angel and my devil

(on either shoulder)

take nights off to get

drunk and play poker

so I can be a revelation

of guilt-free sarcasm

through written word

and half a laugh.

© 2015 Erica Daubert


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Dear Erica,

"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"

A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".

Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.

Very best regards,

Rick

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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enjoyed well. good. with wishes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love the duel .. had me laughing, had me frowning .. has me wishing i could stop and read this brief poem over and over. Clever, punchy and a highly original picture of what and how!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very tongue and cheek.

The idea of an angel and a demon playing poker intrigues me...would angels be able to bluff? hmmmm

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Rea
cleverly written...it was short and to the point, i enjoyed reading it:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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idk
Wow. Nice job. Madde me smile.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha I love this one. It's short, simple, and to the point

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol very clever :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I probably play poker with your devil on the third friday of each month.She always wins.I love the poem and it made me laugh

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very witty and yes made me smile too.

We all have a little devilish side which loves to come out and play.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That was really brilliant...Short but stunning... :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Erica Daubert
Erica Daubert

Philadelphia, PA



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Erica Daubert is a Philadelphia-area singer-songwriter, composer and multi-instrumentalist. Born and raised in South Jersey, she was heavily influenced by her grandfather, frontman and guitarist for .. more..

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