Is She Joking?
A Poem by
Erica Daubert
My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)
take nights off to get
drunk and play poker
so I can be a revelation
of guilt-free sarcasm
through written word
and half a laugh.
© 2015 Erica Daubert
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Featured Review
Dear Erica,
"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"
A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".
Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.
Very best regards,
Rick
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Your angel and your devil leave you free to wander at will...not so for most of us...
Posted 12 Years Ago
Your angel and your devil leave you free to wander at will...not so for most of us...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
May times I feel like my better judgement just leaves me too :P I loved the way this poem flows and the playfulness in it :) Great job with this one!
Posted 12 Years Ago
May times I feel like my better judgement just leaves me too :P I loved the way this poem flows and the playfulness in it :) Great job with this one!
lol…love it. So cute and funny. Very artistic as well.
Posted 12 Years Ago
lol…love it. So cute and funny. Very artistic as well.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Pretty cool ... Nice write :))
Posted 12 Years Ago
Pretty cool ... Nice write :))
nice poem....enjoyed this.
Posted 12 Years Ago
nice poem....enjoyed this.
Sweet
Posted 12 Years Ago
Sweet
i myself play poker,lol
nicely done..i loved it!!
Keep writing:)
Posted 12 Years Ago
i myself play poker,lol
nicely done..i loved it!!
Keep writing:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
awesome poem i liked this:)
Posted 12 Years Ago
awesome poem i liked this:)
Rather amusing poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Rather amusing poem.
I like the concept of this piece a lot, its very creative!
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like the concept of this piece a lot, its very creative!
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Added on October 27, 2011
Last Updated on November 2, 2015
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Erica Daubert Philadelphia, PA
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Erica Daubert is a Philadelphia-area singer-songwriter, composer and multi-instrumentalist. Born and raised in South Jersey, she was heavily influenced by her grandfather, frontman and guitarist for ..
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