Alice

I want to be mad, perfectly insane,
Not a care in the world, not a thought in my brain.
You can wear a hat and say youre a hatter,
But I have some different views on the matter.

Oh Alice, oh Alice you are perfectly right,
Wonderland is simply amazing at night,
Everything still, no horse flies are neighing,
And everything in the forrest seems to be saying.

Goodnight, goodnight we must say our goodbyes,
Unless you can see us through different eyes,
And if you can you'll know what it means,
That everything is not as it seems. 

Reviews

[Tex]

very nice write. Great rhyme. very clever. well done friend.

[Green]

I liked the rhythm in this. It kind of bounces along and ropes you in. Good job.

[Tasha]

I liked it, the last stanza was brilliant. Keep it up

~Tasha

[Starlit Dhrub]

hmm..very very impressive writing....i loved it!!! good going