Sketches

Do I have to rhyme for it to make sense
Fit in your box for me to get prints
Follow all these rules just to get a few cents

Not just fit into this single row of houseplants?

Can't I just  de ete a letter or fall out of 
                                                            line

Add spaces    so that  it's  not  in  time

Sketch out a thought without it being fine,
Not perfect, I just want freedom to write

These thoughts on my mind are keeping me captive

What happened
When did I get entrapped in

Overthinking air that I breathe
Or words that I speak
I'm feeling like I am just asking

For trouble, it's troubling, all the things I have seen
Brokenness pain and all the anxiety
How can I feel so lost but then also freed
Searching, I don't know the words between A-Z

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Some great writer wrote. Organized poetry is boring. Un-organized thoughts on paper are masterpieces.
"Can't I just de ete a letter or fall out of
line
Add spaces so that it's not in time
Sketch out a thought without it being fine,
Not perfect, I just want freedom to write"
I did like the above lines my friend. I would tell you. Write what you feel. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

This write is amazing, funny, clever, and creative, and may I add, blunt. You didn't mention punctuations, but I got the point period (see what I did there and here

tyfs
I enjoyed this read.

[Caleb is typing...]

Ahaha I love the pun! It was fun to "sketch" out, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[LazerRays]

Hey this was pretty hip! I love it dude. Very smooth to read, and interesting to concept. Well imma head out but wanted to stop by and see ur poetry. Pretty epic if you ask me. Love it.

[Caleb is typing...]

Ahhhh I'm late to the reply but thank you for the kind words!!

[Kari Rakitan]

This is a fun poem. Personally, all the reasons you listed are why I generally prefer to write prose over poetry. I like having more freedom to express myself.

[Caleb is typing...]

Same here! It’s hard sometimes to be restricted into rhyming or cadence when there’s so much to say, that’s why I try to flow with both and it’s fun when they clash together. Been writing a lot more prose recently though

[spacelava]

I loved this! Especially the creativity that went into when writing the following:

Can't I just de ete a letter or fall out of
line
Add spaces so that it's not in time
Sketch out a thought without it being fine,
Not perfect, I just want freedom to write

A very relevant topic tbh, I understand your struggle and desperate need to express yourself. You have a wonderful way with words - great job!

[Caleb is typing...]

Thank you so much for the kind words!

[Nix is typing...]

Hehe, I'm glad you read some of his stuff Marija! I told you it was good! :) I'm soooo glad you agree!

[Nix is typing...]

THiS IS SOOOO GOOD BT!!! Five stars! I love how you can just spout out random poems like that!

[Just Kim]

so very creative and nicely written.

[Caleb is typing...]

Thank you!!

[Just Kim]

....not a problem.