Right

Right

A Poem by Cakes

 

I leave my dreams on the sand,
kiss my hopes goodbye,
I step further into the sea,
staring at the muted sky.
There is no hesitation--the water grows more strong,
In the depths of the blue is where I belong.

© 2009 Cakes


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Posted 15 Years Ago


Short and sad, just how I like them. "In the depths of the blue is where I belong" This line really hit home with me. I think I have been there staring into the sea, great imagery.

Thanks for sharing

Posted 15 Years Ago


Its sad and short, and leaves me kind of speechless.

I really like it.

Even though it's short, it holds a great depth of imagery.

Great work! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Roseville, CA



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