The fall

Angels fall,
And demons rise
Satan takes over,
As god dies.
Your doom is here,
Hold your breath.
Choose gods side
And perish in vain
Or rise with the fallen,
And live another day.
As the sun sets,
On the last day,
Say goodbye to light,
And hello to flames.
Hell hath risen,
Taken its place.
The good will perish,
And we shall take
Our place

Reviews

[PpHy]

Uhm... what can i say? This sis the first time I am reading a poem that has left me spell bound! The title is apt for the content. It managed to create the aura that you had in mind while writing this poem(while i am still confused whether it is gloomy or dark?!)! well done! :D

[alltheloveabove]

weird, with ideas I object to, but good flow.

[C.C. Marx]

Really well written and I like the line "or rise with the fallen, and live another day." Because to me it means choosing a side and if u choose a certain side you can live.

[rnuff]

simply amazing, i've read this 3 times now. Love it

[Suavis_Umbra]

OH MY GOD , i love it it's just so pure. I could almost hear someone singing this in my head. The poem is amazingly amazing [ If that makes sense to you]. I really how you pack the punch with short sentences and powerful imagery words. Truly you are amazing. I look forward to reading more XD XD