Fallen

I'm just a girl,

Your just a boy.

But in each others eyes,

We see so much more.

I see your wings,

I see your scars

The fire in your eyes, 

Shows other worlds.

You awaken a part of me,

Something unseen.

My wings unfold,

Scarred from battle,

My hair burned black,

As dark as your soul.

We've fought so hard,

Fallen from grace.

We've fought for each other,

Our scars show that race.

We're fallen angels,

You and I.

You've fallen for me, 

I see this to be true.

Well guess what angel,

I've fallen for you.

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

If you like each other that's what counts. We recognize in a true friend different qualities, not just the superficial. Sounds like love to me.

[♪Barklight♪]

That's beautiful!!!! 100/100! ^_^

[Suavis_Umbra]

Wow , truly amazing. I love the continual beat of the poem. "Fallen from grace.
We've fought for each other,
Our scars show that race."
I love this. It's just so wonderfully put , you have the talent of making words fit in a song. :D LOVE IT XD XD XD

[Caitlynn Cusick]

You should look at my friends and read some of Anthony armstrongs writing.

[forevermore1218]

You are such a good poet!!!
The emotions you portray in your writing are so real and how you feel for Anthony are so beautiful. Fantastic job and welcome to Writers :)

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

so awesome.


I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!