BFF

My BFF is mad at me! This is for her!

Kristin is my BFF! :D

She has been there for me 

through thick and thin.

Never has she backstabed me!

Yes I have done some backstabbing s**t to her. :(

I realize my mistake by the 3rd person I said s**t to

I shouldnt of said.

I love her with all my heart!

I have known her since 1st grade. (WOW LONG TIME)

I hope to make it up to her and show her that I love her!

Im very sorry for all I have said and done.

I deserve by her, to be backstabed.

Never in all my life have I felt so terible.

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammer. this is for a friend.

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

Writing is the best therapy for ridding yourself of negative feelings. Once you put your thoughtd down in black and white You have a chance to evaluate whether tye are true or not. What you are writing is poetic prose.Poetry has rules like anyother form of art.

Meter is what defines poetry from prose it makes you writing flow when read aloud and gives it more authority. You have the ideas but need to polish up your presentation. ivor Aka poeticpiers

[John Stussy]

Filled with your heart. Good job.

[E. M. Murren]

This is a heartfelt work. When we know someone long enough we are always doing stuff that we regret. All you can do is ask forgiveness and make amends if possible. Then let it go. Find writing.

[Erotic Goddess]

Ah, that's how it goes and she'll forgive you, that's how BFFs are! :) Lord knows me and mine have been up and down and up and down again! :) It's life and it's what makes it worth working through. Thanks for sharing this!

Love,
Stephanie

[Tai Chi Italy]

Sure she will forgive you Caitie! That is what friends do. I can't ignore the spellings. 'back stabbed and terrible' Glad you are happy with your boyfriend, I wonder is he anything to do with your fall out with your friend? This happens. Smiling at you, Tai

[Emily B]

I'm guessing your friend forgave you. Remember that we sometimes run out of second chances. Friends are important--treat her well.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Wow... I can understand how you feel, but hopefully she realizes how you feel... writing is truly a great way of getting your emotions out and telling the person how you feel... even if you will never share it with them... I know I have wrote my bestfriend (well now she's my ex bff) but i've wrote her poems that she's never read... granted she was the one thats stabbed me in the back constantly... But there is always room to forgive... I know everytime i have forgiven her... but that is only if she wants me to forgive her....

[eli mercuree rue]

i'm glad you said 's**t' in this poem
i think people having been neglecting words like s**t and f**k and c**t
and i love those words

thank you

for saying 's**t'
you forgot an r in terrible


hehe

um the colors confuse me
i dont know if they have a meaning or if you just felt colorful
when posting


i agree with H.A.M. 's review...

:)

[J. Hampton]

Humbling oneself ....is the hugest way to apologize....
well done.

Hope it's well with you both.

words....are powerful stuff

Blesssssssss

[H. A. M.]

A poem admitting your wrongs and asking forgiveness. That's cool!
It's an honest write that has that 'I'm sorry' feeling to it. Nice.
I hope things work out.