HAPPY

This poem is now a phoney. It may be a good right but its not true anymore.

Iv had a turning point in my life!

Most my senior year has been rotten.

Nothing seemed to go right and

my love life seemed to be getting worse by the minute.

One day, someone came in my life.

He told me i was pretty, funny, and cool to be around.

He is amazing!

He makes me smile, laugh, and make me feel good about myself.

We mayhave hard times and get in really big fights,

but you know what?

Im not giving up on him no matter how bad or how much we fight.

Im not going to give up on him just because I cry most nights.

Iv given up to much and it has gotten me no where.  
Word of advice to all,

DONT GIVE UP ON SOMEONE OR SOMETHING YOU WANT.

Author's Note

Ignore grammer please! None of this rhyms and its really random and jumbbled. Thanks for taking time to read this!

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy]

Caitie, I am very happy you have found someone to make you smile, but if he also makes you cry more than smile, it is better to give up on him than live your so young life in misery, he is a part of your journey, just be you and flexible, enjoy the good times but DO NOT put up with any s**t, no one has the right to make you unhappy. NO ONE. Keep writing and keep positive, oh and keep up your studies at school....you have a good life ahead of you and qualifications are the start of it. Smiling at you, Tai,

[Rain]

This is not phoney!! Please read my " Why I Still Love Her." Your piece should be attached to it. Of course you don't want to spend your whole life in a battle to change him, but if you believe...it's never phoney. I loved this. Rain..

[Morgan A Lynch]

very honest work.. cute also.. love the raw emotion you wrote it in.

[Tania Leigh]

Excellent advice within an encouraging poem :-)

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This was very sweet and cute :) Very loving words you have here hun :) I do hope the fighting stops tho. Just be careful, and never let anyone treat you badly :) Good work!

Mikey

[forfila]

You tell'em girl, this is a great write, go for what you want whole heartedly.

I hope the tears stop, I hope you get the joy of your love to fruit, and I hope it all goes well for you.