Christmas Lights

Christmas Lights

A Poem by Caitlin.
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For a contest =).

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The Christmas lights shine so bright,

Blue and orange,

Yellow and white,

They make the tree come alight.

 

As we sit and wait,

For that December 25th,

We watch the lights that blaze,

On the trees and roof tops.

 

Christmas lights,

What would Christmas be like,

Without the shining lights?

© 2009 Caitlin.


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I like this- I was just reading a Christmas story to my younger sister the other day and I figured I'd take a look at this to get into the mood :) I think it's cute, can a guy say that?? Oh well :) It reminds me of one of those children's books that everyone enjoys- maybe kinda Dr. Seuss, which I love. I hope it doesn't insult you that I felt that way, because it was really good! I just didn't know if you were going for an older audience or anything. The rhyme scheme makes it more appealing to a younger audience, but that isn't a bad thing at all. I enjoyed it :) Keep writing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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What a sweet, short way to remember the lights! I enjoyed this very much. It brought a smile to my face. Thanks for entering this piece, and good luck!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem

Author: Nancy Lee Shrader

Posted 15 Years Ago


The rhyme pattern in this poem is good, because it doesn't sound like it was a struggle to put together and it doesn't sound cheesy either. It's a sweet, simple poem that is refreshing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this- I was just reading a Christmas story to my younger sister the other day and I figured I'd take a look at this to get into the mood :) I think it's cute, can a guy say that?? Oh well :) It reminds me of one of those children's books that everyone enjoys- maybe kinda Dr. Seuss, which I love. I hope it doesn't insult you that I felt that way, because it was really good! I just didn't know if you were going for an older audience or anything. The rhyme scheme makes it more appealing to a younger audience, but that isn't a bad thing at all. I enjoyed it :) Keep writing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The lights are the best part of Christmas in my opinion. They give so much happiness! you've deffinetly portrayed this in your poem, good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Lights to make Christmas very special indeed, nice write.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Caitlin.

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CAITLIN ~ 14 ~ AUSTRALIAN I have eyes that change colour Im a tomboy I get goodish grades I stand my ground easily both physically and mentally I have perfect balance A few strange phobias A .. more..


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