I'll be...

I'll be...

A Poem by DJ
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Thoughts of love and life.

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I’ll be…

A lover’s tender kiss,

Fervent and true,

The striking moon’s eclipse,

A luminescent view.

 

I’ll be…

Waves on sandy shore,

Crashing with the tide,

The mountain you adore,

Standing strong with pride.

 

I’ll be…

Spring times gentle rain,

Colourful flowers bloom,

The ease from all your pain,

Your beloved music tune.

 

I’ll be…

The eagles perpetual soar,

Each footprint that you make,

The vast lands you explore,

Every single breath you take.

 

I’ll be…

The gust of wind concealed,

Soft glistens in the snow,

Summer sun revealed,

I’ll be everywhere you go.

 

I’ll be…

The truth in all you seek,

The love inside your heart,

Strength when you are weak,

The creative flow of art.

 

I’ll be…

The wisdom in the word,

The justice in your cause,

Your willpower undeterred,

The calmness when you pause.

 

I’ll be…

The dreams that you chase,

The dreams not yet discovered,

No matter what the pace,

In time they’ll be uncovered.

 

I’ll be…

The beauty that you see,

With your empathetic eyes,

In your life I’ll be,

The answer to your why’s.

 

I’ll be…

Your unwavering conviction,

In all you know is true,

You are my addiction,

I’ll remain in you.

 

I’ll be…

No matter what fate brings,

No matter what HE plans,

I’ll fly with open wings,

In your heart I’ll land.

 

I’ll be…

The colour in your sky,

Your love set me free,

In you I will reside,

Forever I will be…

© 2013 DJ


Author's Note

DJ
This came to mind as I was thinking about someone very close to my heart and I just want her to know... that forever I will be <3

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I will be honest I do not usually like rhyming poetry, often times the rhymes feel forced or over used, but honestly your poetry is just lovely. I love the hope in your stanzas and how even though you seem to have such an unhappy burden weighing on your life, you still don't seem to just give up or in. And for me who can write such unhappy poetry with nothing truly wrong I find that to be a very admirable quality, thank you for your beautiful words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Wow, that's interesting, I've never met a poet who doesn't like rhyme. But I understand your reasons.. read more
kera moondust

11 Years Ago

Your rhymes are beautiful =) and you are quite welcome.



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That's so sweet and tender. She's lucky to have you as
A person in her life! Your friend Bernadette

Posted 11 Years Ago


I will be honest I do not usually like rhyming poetry, often times the rhymes feel forced or over used, but honestly your poetry is just lovely. I love the hope in your stanzas and how even though you seem to have such an unhappy burden weighing on your life, you still don't seem to just give up or in. And for me who can write such unhappy poetry with nothing truly wrong I find that to be a very admirable quality, thank you for your beautiful words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Wow, that's interesting, I've never met a poet who doesn't like rhyme. But I understand your reasons.. read more
kera moondust

11 Years Ago

Your rhymes are beautiful =) and you are quite welcome.
This is awesome I love it, I love it. Beautifully written and it captures so much nature, and translates into love which I believe works as a dynamic duo. Thank you again for this read, it brought joy to my heart and I know there is a women out there I would love to share such beautiful words with.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, yes there is a woman out there with whom you will be able to share your words w.. read more
This is beautiful Cairo.. the poem's recipient has to know what being loved feels like through these words and that no matter what, you will exist in everything.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

That is a beautiful way to look at it Lori, the cycle of life re-invented, I like it.
Ravyne Hawke

11 Years Ago

*smiles* it helps when you lose so many loved ones, as I have in the last 5 yrs.
DJ

11 Years Ago

I'm sorry for your losses my friend. I know that pain well and I can see how your belief would help .. read more
extraordinarily excellent :) Thank you for sharing
I’ll be…
The reflection of you in the river,
The strings of your desire,
The dream and passion that you aspire,
The emotions that you inspire

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Vani. Ohhh I like the stanza you wrote, that is beautiful!!!!!
Vani Jalagar

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is a truly beautiful poem.loved it especially these lines " I’ll be…
Your unwavering conviction,
In all you know is true,
You are my addiction,
I’ll remain in you.
I’ll be…
No matter what fate brings,
No matter what HE plans,
I’ll fly with open wings,
In your heart I’ll land.
I’ll be…
The colour in your sky,
Your love set me free,
In you I will reside,
Forever I will be…".

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend, I'm glad you like it.
My friend, you have an excellent talent for imagery. This was a well-done and very moving poem expressing something that is - for most - almost impossible to describe. Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing this.

And by the way - here's a thought for you: Hallmark doesn't write half as well as this. :^D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much! Your review is so humbling! It really means a lot to me my friend. Thank you.. read more
Such beauty, such heartfelt words poured out for all to see. I enjoyed this, a favorite it shall be.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Adam, you humble me sir.
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This is so very very touching, a really beautiful heartfelt read..you write with such emotion :) x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Raven, I am glad you liked it. One of my more positive pieces :)

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