I will be honest I do not usually like rhyming poetry, often times the rhymes feel forced or over used, but honestly your poetry is just lovely. I love the hope in your stanzas and how even though you seem to have such an unhappy burden weighing on your life, you still don't seem to just give up or in. And for me who can write such unhappy poetry with nothing truly wrong I find that to be a very admirable quality, thank you for your beautiful words.
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11 Years Ago
Wow, that's interesting, I've never met a poet who doesn't like rhyme. But I understand your reasons.. read moreWow, that's interesting, I've never met a poet who doesn't like rhyme. But I understand your reasons behind it, sometimes they can seem forced. Rhyme is part of my soul, I love rhyming. Thank you so much for your kind review and nice words, they are a comfort and certainly humble me.
11 Years Ago
Your rhymes are beautiful =) and you are quite welcome.
I will be honest I do not usually like rhyming poetry, often times the rhymes feel forced or over used, but honestly your poetry is just lovely. I love the hope in your stanzas and how even though you seem to have such an unhappy burden weighing on your life, you still don't seem to just give up or in. And for me who can write such unhappy poetry with nothing truly wrong I find that to be a very admirable quality, thank you for your beautiful words.
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11 Years Ago
Wow, that's interesting, I've never met a poet who doesn't like rhyme. But I understand your reasons.. read moreWow, that's interesting, I've never met a poet who doesn't like rhyme. But I understand your reasons behind it, sometimes they can seem forced. Rhyme is part of my soul, I love rhyming. Thank you so much for your kind review and nice words, they are a comfort and certainly humble me.
11 Years Ago
Your rhymes are beautiful =) and you are quite welcome.
This is awesome I love it, I love it. Beautifully written and it captures so much nature, and translates into love which I believe works as a dynamic duo. Thank you again for this read, it brought joy to my heart and I know there is a women out there I would love to share such beautiful words with.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you my friend, yes there is a woman out there with whom you will be able to share your words w.. read moreThank you my friend, yes there is a woman out there with whom you will be able to share your words with, you are a beautiful soul my friend. Thank you for your review.
This is beautiful Cairo.. the poem's recipient has to know what being loved feels like through these words and that no matter what, you will exist in everything.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Lori, your words mean so much to me. You got it, you understood it and I thank you.. read moreThank you so much Lori, your words mean so much to me. You got it, you understood it and I thank you for that. :)
11 Years Ago
That is always a belief I have held.. that we are made of energy and energy doesn't die, it just cha.. read moreThat is always a belief I have held.. that we are made of energy and energy doesn't die, it just changes form.. so bits of us exist in everything around us.
That is a beautiful way to look at it Lori, the cycle of life re-invented, I like it.
11 Years Ago
*smiles* it helps when you lose so many loved ones, as I have in the last 5 yrs.
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I'm sorry for your losses my friend. I know that pain well and I can see how your belief would help .. read moreI'm sorry for your losses my friend. I know that pain well and I can see how your belief would help to ease the loss. I like the thought they those who have passed are not gone.
extraordinarily excellent :) Thank you for sharing
I’ll be…
The reflection of you in the river,
The strings of your desire,
The dream and passion that you aspire,
The emotions that you inspire
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Vani. Ohhh I like the stanza you wrote, that is beautiful!!!!!
This is a truly beautiful poem.loved it especially these lines " I’ll be…
Your unwavering conviction,
In all you know is true,
You are my addiction,
I’ll remain in you.
I’ll be…
No matter what fate brings,
No matter what HE plans,
I’ll fly with open wings,
In your heart I’ll land.
I’ll be…
The colour in your sky,
Your love set me free,
In you I will reside,
Forever I will be…".
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much my friend, I'm glad you like it.
My friend, you have an excellent talent for imagery. This was a well-done and very moving poem expressing something that is - for most - almost impossible to describe. Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing this.
And by the way - here's a thought for you: Hallmark doesn't write half as well as this. :^D
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11 Years Ago
Wow, thank you so much! Your review is so humbling! It really means a lot to me my friend. Thank you.. read moreWow, thank you so much! Your review is so humbling! It really means a lot to me my friend. Thank you so much. Haha Hallmark... theres an idea!
Hi everyone, I am a lyricist, a poet, a survivor and a letter C warrior. If you wish to get to know me then read my poetry as it is based on my inner most feelings, my life experiences and the pieces.. more..