Forever Inked

Forever Inked

A Poem by DJ

The beat of a song, the ink of my pen, 
pulses through me as blood flows through my veins.
The ink expresses my deepest feelings, 
the unexpressable. 
The vibrations reach the depths of my soul, 
breaking down the walls I've built.
The melody clutches at my heart, creativity soaring, 
a gentle reprieve from a bleak reality.
Words are my heartbeat, 
Picasso paints on canvas, I paint on silence.
Words and notes painting me,
 an empty canvas without them.
An extension of my very being, just as you have become,
 a part of me, freshly exposed.

© 2013 DJ


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DJ
Hey people, just a little something I wrote in a few minutes, any feedback is welcome. Thanks :)

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love this part ->

"The melody clutches at my heart, creativity soaring,
a gentle reprieve from a bleak reality.
Words are my heartbeat,
Picasso paints on canvas, I paint on silence.
Words and notes painting me,
an empty canvas without them."

well written. nice flow. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) I appreciate your comments and feedback. Always a pleasure to hear what you hav.. read more



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Oooh, I like this!
"Words are my heartbeat" -- Indeed!
Such a lovely expression of how important and therapeutic writing can be. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review my friend :)
I love the words you use in this one. Beautifully painted indeed :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
"Picasso paints on canvas, I paint on silence.
Words and notes painting me,
an empty canvas without them."
Those are my favorite lines in this nice , well penned poem...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad that you liked it.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I did...You are welcome...:)
love this part ->

"The melody clutches at my heart, creativity soaring,
a gentle reprieve from a bleak reality.
Words are my heartbeat,
Picasso paints on canvas, I paint on silence.
Words and notes painting me,
an empty canvas without them."

well written. nice flow. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DJ

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) I appreciate your comments and feedback. Always a pleasure to hear what you hav.. read more

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Hi everyone, I am a lyricist, a poet, a survivor and a letter C warrior. If you wish to get to know me then read my poetry as it is based on my inner most feelings, my life experiences and the pieces.. more..

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