Smile and realize

Smile and realize

A Poem by CagedEnigma

On my way to the top
Randomly, I keep falling here and there

Hope and faith are the fuel
My mind is the tank
But lately I've been asking
Why is it never always full like the others?
Why is it that it fills up just a little
And is empty in the blink of an eye?

Then I just look back at the days
When I thought there will never be a way
And I look at myself and say
''Hey you stupid emo f**k!
You've found your way to today.''

And I can't help but smile and realize
I think I'm like a drag racer
And life's a series of drag races
Some people may live on different formats
But this is just how I like it for myself.
One at a time, each race, blasting at blistering speed
Aiming to win, and winning with jaw-dropping elegance
I make things looks easy
Then it ends swiftly and I slow down and everything halts.

And until the calendar says it's time for the next one
I have nothing to do
So I sit and ponder, wander and wonder
One second, happy, the next, sad
And until I plant my wheels on the track again
Stand at the starting line determined to reach the finish
Until I remember my aims and motives
I won't be myself, nor feel like him.

© 2013 CagedEnigma


Author's Note

CagedEnigma
You know how there are these days when we're so busy with stuff and seems like they pass in a flash? Well, I miss classes and stuff, miss being busy and on track. And when we're not busy, we're lost. Feel free to share your thoughts on this. :)

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Bravo! Depth and clarity. Well done. Got a real chuckle from this:

''Hey you stupid emo f**k!
You've found your way to today.''



Posted 11 Years Ago


i miss my old days too...
its really easy thoughtful write i really liked it....thanks for sharing you thoughts...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Then I just look back at the days
When I thought there will never be a way
And I look at myself and say
''Hey you stupid emo f**k!
You've found your way to today.''

And I can't help but smile and realize
I think I'm like a drag racer
And life's a series of drag races
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Then I just look back at the days
When I thought there will never be a way
And I look at myself and say
''Hey you stupid emo f**k!
You've found your way today.''

And I can't help but smile and realize
I think I'm like a drag racer
And life's a series of races
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Let's get the fun stuff out of the way...editing...we all love so much in writing...

I see this verse talks about being in the moment...you use drag racer as the motivation in the lines...and how that reflects the mood and change of who you are in the lines...and when that's not around the cycle starts to drag you down...until the moment when you get to be the star again...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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New to writing. It has become a hobby of mine and somehow I find a lot of peace being able to express myself through poems. It's better than letting that voice in your head yap all the time. :p more..

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