Match made in Hades

Match made in Hades

A Poem by CaffeinatedMe
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A whimsical take on the a condemned soul being filibustered by a Devil who takes pride in the job he was made for.

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Oh my, hello, our destinies are to collide shortly, so much to get ready for you and I to play.

You were always on a one way trip to me, soiled your deity's gift of life in such a delightful way.


Nature or nurture? I am an equal opportunist, a sadist like me can’t be to picky.

Demon’s are thugs playing at trivial terrors there in limbo, a mess bound to get sticky.


I’m so very patient, no part of you gets skipped, not today, no hall pass to be had here.

I’m an artist you're my canvas, my tools at the ready, right off the top tier.


More bad news, this millennia I’m feeling petty as hell, forgive the pun, for it’s the last humor I’ll spare.

Hope has no translation here, instead I’ll introduce you to a friend, familiarize yourself with despair.


Hot? I know, come closer I’ll shade you from the heat, pain is king here, time to bend a knee.

I know, this has been one sided, maybe a little verbose, the introduction was splendid, don’t you agree?


You were never lucky, didn’t you expect this?  Your game is over no need to repent.

Pound of flesh?  I’m afraid I higher demands, I'll get my due just as your last drops are slowly spent.


I understand it’s quite a burden, your cross so heavy, not even your messiah could hope to bare.

Life, a gift none of you deserved, maybe I influenced you with a whisper, I never said i played fair.

© 2017 CaffeinatedMe


Author's Note

CaffeinatedMe
This was a quick write, and I had fun with it. Very likely will have some re-writes in the near future, any critics on structure/flow/awsomeness is appreciated.

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Wow, This is awesome. Very creative.

Posted 7 Years Ago


i had fun reading it,it would make a great movie

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Darkly humorous. I loved it, the speech was quite funny and well-written. The picture is perfect and the title is apropos. The only critique is that it needs to be edited a bit, mostly just some grammatical errors here and there.

The flow is quite good as the words I read rolled right off the tongue. Nice work, Caffe! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on September 2, 2017
Last Updated on September 3, 2017
Tags: Hell, Condemned, Torture, Devil, Hades, Religious, Fun, Humor

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CaffeinatedMe
CaffeinatedMe

Phoenix, AZ



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