Riley

it is howmy friend acts and so I put her actions into a poem

Her thoughs are strange

unknowing,undeciding

swirling and twirling

like a six year old

with so much to say

when will she make up her mind

will be old and decaying,

or young and youthful?

What is there mo to say?

Her thoughts are strange.

Author's Note

ingore grammer problems

Reviews

[Sarah Jane]

I like it, it makes me want to know what her thoughts acually are.

[Mauricio Montoya]

what I get from this piece is she naive and in to her self and maybe out to lunch.
nice work.

[SilentSKY]

*no comment* good, but still *no comment* lol