Cliche Blue

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I shout into the void:                           Why are there so many people awake at this time?

Because we're writers!

They shout!

You can count on us

To be awake at two

And feeling             cliché blue.

Reviews

[Ty]

Awake at two I shall be. Elusive, oasis, the illusions, fading in dreams. This is a neat write.

[emipoemi]

Of all the poetic 2am poems I've read, this is the most concise and clever. The aesthetic is even interesting. I'm not too sure if it visually adds to the poem, but in such cases as these: whatever floats your boat. Well done!

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Such a great piece! How true it is, we are all insomniacs and crazy inside, but we hold it in till no one can judge and release our insanity with such rhetoric! Love love love this piece, thanks for sharing and inspiring those... two am cliche blues.

[Najam Us Saher]

This is very creative...I liked the way you presented this poem. Beautifully written. I loved it.