The Praying

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The praying don't deserve a beating
So why are your promises so damn fleeting
You've got some anger you're creating in me
And I'm praying that you will just 'yes' me
So why are your words making me bruising
I'm not cruising in your guilt anymore
So don't turn my calls into a chore
When I pick up the phone I hope you answer the door
Metaphorically I think we have this all worked out
But I haven't spoken to you since that night
But I don't want to fight, so I won't call you tonight
Or maybe ever I don't know
I'm feeling lonely
I'm you're only
Don't know why you'd want to disown me
Maybe I'm praying that you'll forget me
Forget me not
Forget me
Forget me not
Forget me

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

"When I pick up the phone I hope you answer the door
Metaphorically I think we have this all worked out..."
kick-a*s stylings here Cae. If there's an anger growing in your pen then these gems are a welcome by-product.
Stay angry.

[Najam Us Saher]

Last lines clearly show your nature that you want that person to forget you and also the same time you doesn't want to...