Honeydew

I'm not a piece of artwork

So stop adding purples to my skin

When you drink too much gin

And stop acting like it makes you cool

To skip all your classes in school

To go smoke with your buddies behind the gym

The same place you once painted me until I was nothin'

I avoided my mom for weeks after that

Didn't want her to see you're just like my dad

Maybe I've got some issues there

But honestly, I don't know that I care

I really do feel like I hate you

But sometimes your words are sweet like honeydew

So honey do you want to stay with me

Even though I know how sour your hands will always be

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Nice symbolism of honey. Your words had depth in it and I can feel your emotions. Descriptive and thoughtful write.