Gold

*** part of the Sugar & Honey series ***

You're gold, solid gold

And I'm just a forest fire

I want to hold you in my hands

But I'll just melt you down

And I can't make you into pretty chains

But I still have yours around my neck

I still have your jacket too

But we aren't talking about that yet

You're golden and shining

A sun, a star

And I'm just way too far

I really don't know where I am

I really wish I knew what I was thinking

My heart's not even stinging anymore

There's just emptiness

Where you used to be

I don't want us to have been temporary

But it seems like that's where we're headed

I wish I knew what the hell is up with my thoughts and my heart

I only know that I don't like us being apart

But we can't physically be close

Cause you're gold

And I'm just on fire

I want to hold you in my hands

But I'll just melt you down again

Reviews

[WoodenChair]

So great! You are gold, I'm just on fire, such an interesting way to put it. I like how you get the point across here.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

So great! You are gold, I'm just on fire, such an interesting way to put it. I like how you get the point across here.

[Shasha]

Your writings are interesting, really! This is again a great piece! Keep writing!

[Najam Us Saher]

Nice symbolism...well done friend :)

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Your way of expressing is really good...Keep it up... :)