Honey

*** part of the Sugar & Honey series ***

Your honey hands used to caress my skin

But lately it just feels like bee stings on my heart

I'm not really sure what's happening

I think we're drifting apart

But maybe it's just me who's floating away

And I don't really know what to say

I've got mixed emotions

And no fixed notions

All I know right now is I miss your honey hands

Melting against my fire skin

I miss your forest eyes

Looking into mine

I miss the sighs and gasps for air

And the quiet moments after the fact

Now I just feel kind of detached

Reviews

[EcstaticEuphoria]

I resonate so deeply with your words. This piece really capture that start if the death of the relationship that we have each likely felt. That moment of waiting the past feeling, but knowing somehow that they are gone. Great job!

[WoodenChair]

So deep....nicely expressed your emotions...

[Cae]

are you just copying peoples comments now lol

[WoodenChair]

are you just copying peoples comments now lol

[Najam Us Saher]

So deep....nicely expressed your emotions...

[Sanskrity Mishra]

It's really touchy and quite emotional..A good piece of work

[APOORVA]

THIS SORT OF PASSION IN LOVE IS LOST SOMEWHERE
GOOD ONE