Just her/Just him

Just her/Just him

A Poem by Entropy of the mind
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I am

"
There`s a man and he walks on me
When he is in need
There is a man
Never seen him love an insane girl
so intensely
And I know that he does not love me
I don't think I love him
But he is a nice relief from the stress
And I know he is bad for me
But he makes me feel free
Am I just her to you?
When my bed sheets are beneath you
Am I just her to you?
wouldn't be surprised
because half the time
You are him to me.

© 2013 Entropy of the mind


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This is wonderful! I love the way you wrote this!
"There is a man
Never seen him love an insane girl
so intensely
And I know that he does not love me
I don't think I love him"
Those lines give me a strong impression. I will probably be looking back at this writing for thoughts. It is great. Nicely worded, great flow, it's perfect!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Entropy of the mind

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)



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This is wonderful! I love the way you wrote this!
"There is a man
Never seen him love an insane girl
so intensely
And I know that he does not love me
I don't think I love him"
Those lines give me a strong impression. I will probably be looking back at this writing for thoughts. It is great. Nicely worded, great flow, it's perfect!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Entropy of the mind

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)

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