Just her/Just him

A Poem by Entropy of the mind

I am

There`s a man and he walks on me

When he is in need

There is a man

Never seen him love an insane girl

so intensely

And I know that he does not love me

I don't think I love him

But he is a nice relief from the stress

And I know he is bad for me

But he makes me feel free

Am I just her to you?

When my bed sheets are beneath you

Am I just her to you?

wouldn't be surprised

because half the time

You are him to me.

© 2013 Entropy of the mind

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Sharon

This is wonderful! I love the way you wrote this!
"There is a man
Never seen him love an insane girl
so intensely
And I know that he does not love me
I don't think I love him"
Those lines give me a strong impression. I will probably be looking back at this writing for thoughts. It is great. Nicely worded, great flow, it's perfect!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)

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Sharon

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11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)

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Entropy of the mind

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