Rest

This is yet another Englyn, (hopefully you're getting used to them by now), with a lot of symbolism. Technically, it's about a girl...but...

Rest

 

Rest your head, there is no bed to lie on,
Dawn comes, my hand is red,
Cry in pain, for what I said,
Come, lay down, this day is dead.

 

Darfod.

 

Ruarc Cinaed

Reviews

[Alex W]

Very sad piece, nice write.

[Coyote Poetry]

In so few words. You create a sad vision. Each word having a purpose. I like the direct ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[HorrorMaster]

Very good short poem

[EMP]

short but sweet. I really like this. there's good rhythm good rhyme and good imagery. brilliant write.

[Kyle]

:0 Nice job!
With just a few words, you created a nice structure.
Very well stated, and nice flowing,
very relatable.
I think you got the emotion down well in it. :)

[NeverSurrender]

Very short poem, but I do feel that it's finished. Good rhyme and nice flow.

Well done

N.S.

[zombiikillah666]

Rhymes well. good job. (:

[Marximilien]

The poem has a small number of words yet they mean a lot of things. This poem is GREAT!

[chaffy]

hand is red? sybolising blood? good, liked the ending.

[deeps]

This is AWESOME!!!
I so loved this.