Rest

Rest

A Poem by Ruarc Cinaed
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This is yet another Englyn, (hopefully you're getting used to them by now), with a lot of symbolism. Technically, it's about a girl...but...

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Rest

 

Rest your head, there is no bed to lie on,
Dawn comes, my hand is red,
Cry in pain, for what I said,
Come, lay down, this day is dead.

 

Darfod.

 

Ruarc Cinaed

© 2010 Ruarc Cinaed


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Very sad piece, nice write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


In so few words. You create a sad vision. Each word having a purpose. I like the direct ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very good short poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


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short but sweet. I really like this. there's good rhythm good rhyme and good imagery. brilliant write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


:0 Nice job!
With just a few words, you created a nice structure.
Very well stated, and nice flowing,
very relatable.
I think you got the emotion down well in it. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very short poem, but I do feel that it's finished. Good rhyme and nice flow.

Well done

N.S.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Rhymes well. good job. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


The poem has a small number of words yet they mean a lot of things. This poem is GREAT!

Posted 14 Years Ago


hand is red? sybolising blood? good, liked the ending.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is AWESOME!!!
I so loved this.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 13, 2010
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Ruarc Cinaed
Ruarc Cinaed

Llanelli, Wales, United Kingdom



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