Breathe

This is another Englyn. This poem is about a friend, a girl to be precise...

Breathe

 

See the light, it makes us free-from our fear,

Hear her voice, rejoice, breathe,

Forsake the pain, and take me,

Show me the way, I pray, lead.

 

Darfod.

 

Ruarc Cinaed.

Reviews

[Shade Teller]

Again good job

[Tori]

This was quite remarkable. Its very hard to find a good short poem, and this one was quite amazing.

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this alot very deep and uplifing.... overall i thought you did great on this very well expressed.../ nice job!!