SAT: Sarah's Story Part 2

What a test, I think I just snored. But all that I need is a good score. It's 9:50 a few minutes have passed. This test is a pain in the... well I think you know where I'm going with this. Chewing on my pencil, trying to think, waiting and waiting for a single thought to sink. My mom has pressured me since the day I was born which was total humility. Told me not to play fetch with the dog. She said it was an act of futility. If I do bad, I know what I'll see. Disappointment in my mother's eyes that I always found pretty. 

Author's Note

I am only 11 but be honest. I need constructive feedback! :)

Reviews

[Nadia]

I like the way you're writing this, telling an interesting story with clever rhymes. It's really taking off. I plan to read more!