love

SATIRE

When I laid my eyes on you

I was hit by thunderbolt

My heart was racing very fast

My racing heart went off the charts

And I was taken by surprise

You flushed on me a funny smile

The arrow hit my very heart

My head is going round and round

Am jumping up and down

Oh! I got bitten by the bug!

 

 

 

Author's Note

Poking fun at an emotion.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

When I laid my eyes on you
I was hit by thunderbolt


I love these first two lines, very powerful way to begin, I remember that feeling, and you penned it beautifully.

My heart was racing very fast
My racing heart went of the charts

I love the racing and off the charts, it says those emotions hit fast and over the top.

thank you for writing and sharing. I enjoyed reading this.