Mental Scribble

Mental Scribble

A Poem by C. Mclaren
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The title says it all.

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when teardrops freeze in space

all life seems like suspended animation

nothing breathes and nothing wakes

black cold naked lone

this range holds nothing

but our voices can't go home

when you're hunting for a footing

even rough stone seems like a blessing

let yourself find a way out

because nothing else matters. 

© 2011 C. Mclaren


Author's Note

C. Mclaren
Say what you want. It's roughly done.

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I like this alot, Has a dark feel to it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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C. Mclaren
C. Mclaren

Barbados



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These books of poems, songs or whatever it is I write have gotten fairly good reviews so far from the persons across the world I've shared them with. Some of my writings are dark, some give light and .. more..

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