Call This the World

An explanation

Call this prose
It's none of my business what you call it
I'm just writing it
And you can publish it if you want to

Call this stupid
It's not my problem
It's yours
And you can own it or let it go

Call this meaningless
It may well be
But it fills a hole in my life
And it is there to fill a hole in yours

Call this the world
That's all it is
Just the world on the computer
When you won't notice the trees

Reviews

[Michael G.]

Good content, sir.
Call it whatever, the overall importance is for you... and the offering to the reader is just as valuable, if they decide to take you up on it.
All in all a solid piece.

(For what its worth... a simple elimination of one word and this poem opens itself to a lot of readers, much younger than me. That is for you to decide. Either way, you did well.)
Keep writing... this was good.