Searching for Love

Describing the Fear of Emptiness

And she was afraid

Because she always ran and never stayed,

Because she began

believing that in future

She would find herself a miniature,

a small figure, just a mirror of her being,

rolling from bed to bed,

running, seeking, fleeing

and desperately looking for something to be said,

desperately searching for something she could keep beside

to fill the emptiness she had inside.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

'rolling from bed to bed' gave this poem its pathos and depth. Youn express succinctly emotion and desperation.

[Faith Knoll]

Wow... there is so much depth to this poem! Amazing job!

[C.S.John]

Thanks, I appreciate your feedback!