Lie

Lie

A Poem by Brian
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Poem about those who lie

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No matter how hard I try

It is the same old thing

Just another damn lie

And the consequences they bring

 

They try to pacify

But it does nothing but patronize

With another damn lie

Nobody seems to rectify

 

With their unsympathetic eyes

With an unfeeling heart

They pile up those damn lies

And then things fall a part

 

I'll keep trying

Want let it pull me down

But I am sure they will keep lying

But they will never see me frown

 

© 2008 Brian


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I know exactly how you feel. You know they lie, and obviously it hurts cuz they take either don't take you serious or take you for a fool, but you won't show any weakness, cuz we are above it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


With there unsympathetic eyes I think it's "with their unsympathetic lies..." not "there" just making sure you correct that. Spoken from the heart Brian. Good rhyming scheme. Just make sure to grammer and spell check before you put it on bud. talk later!



Posted 16 Years Ago



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Brian
Brian

Monroe, WA



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I love to write short stories, occasionally poetry. I am very friendly. I believe everybody is somebody and everbody is worth knowing. more..

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