Kiss me Goodnight

One kiss and my heart is in flight.
I'm the damsel and you are my knight.
I'd run to you at any speed -climb any mountain to see you smile;
No matter the heights or the miles.
In your dark times, I'll be your light.
This love is similar to a fairytale.
My soul with you SAILS.
We are untameable- a flower that grows wild.
A rose with thorns yet so devine.
We are heaven and hell combined.

Always kiss me Goodnight my handsome knight..

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmm like first love's innocence ... with a touch of reality "We are heaven and hell combined."
closing line contains a whole lot of wisdom ... i read in the Bible the advice in Ephesians 4:26 "Do not let the sun go down on our anger?" ... a fine path to follow especially in a committed relationship says i! nice poem ma'am!
E.

[Laconic Meraki]

Never go to sleep mad.....

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ....................

[Maxwell Ryder]

I go to sleep mad all the time :(

[Laconic Meraki]

Don't do it.. Breath and Let it go

[Maxwell Ryder]

Can’t.Too stubborn. Makes the love spicier to keep it a week.

[Laconic Meraki]

I can't relate...

[Chris Shaw]

A delightful romantic write confirmiing love come what may. Through good times and bad times. Constant and steady. Even the most beautiful of roses can have their share of thorns. Nicely done.

Chris

[Laconic Meraki]

Every rose has its thorns.
Make sure you are prepared.💜🤞

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph..]

Christa, I re-visited this piece, and still love it. You are a ‘romantic’ like me. When I write ‘love’ stories, I often fall in love with my protagonist🥴. -Ralph

[Laconic Meraki]

Hopeless romantic at that.

[Laconic Meraki]

It makes me smile that you came back to re read it 😉

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph)]

I’ll be back😉😀

[Laconic Meraki]

Oook lol👑👑👑

[Mr. D]

Let me go ahead and be "that guy" for a moment or two. If you're looking for a "knight in shining armor", let me dispel that nasty notion: he doesn't exist. There is no perfect man out there, though you may devise one in your head. Trying to find your "knight" would be akin to trying to find air in space. The knightly men we see on TV are a mere fantasy. The dashing, strapping, brave, and handsome young knight? That's a child's fairytale. Fairytales don't hold up when reality kicks in. You will find that putting your faith in a "knight" will fail you whenever his armor starts to rust. If you put your faith in people, you're going to be very disappointed. If you search for the perfect "knightly" man, you're going to end up disappointed. And most girls that say they want a nice guy choose the bad boys anyway because the "knight" becomes boring and shallow. It's a dream and nothing more.

[Franky]

This is sweeeeeet! 😀

[Laconic Meraki]

Thanks Frankie

[Pete]

heartfelt and emotionally driven. smooth flow on love's deep, up & down road. catchy title. we have to fight for love through thick & thin. it speaks to me of being in love no matter what comes against us. very much like this ... :)

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph..]

Oh, wow...this spoke to me. If your 'Knight' really exists, he's very fortunate to have you in his life!

[Laconic Meraki]

Oh. I'm sure he does. I just haven't met him yet 🤗

[Laconic Meraki]

Though this is how I felt with my ex at one point. When I actually wrote this. I realized it wasn't love.

[Coyote Poetry]

I am old and I learn. Those kisses are never forgotten. Thank you Christa for sharing the amazing poetry for love. I could feel the need and the joy in the words.
Coyote

[Laconic Meraki]

Sometimes our knight in shining armor ends up just an idiot in tin foil haha

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Love can be trickery.

[Laconic Meraki]

Such is life. Love opens our eyes sometimes. But it can also blind you.

[genocide]

yeah love can blind you and that person can just wind up using you

[Laconic Meraki]

Yep... This is true

[Katrina Mckeown]

Love it, love is a battlefield.. “we are heaven and hell combined ! Great sentiment “always kiss me goodnight my knight. Never go to bed with resentment.

[Laconic Meraki]

Thank you!!! 💕

[genocide]

a love poem to your knight in shining armor

[Laconic Meraki]

Something like that. He ended up my idiot in tin toil but that's beside the point! Hahw

[genocide]

ha ha now that's funny my dear

[Lea Sheryn]

I love it. Deeply romantic!

[Laconic Meraki]

Thank you. 😘

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome.