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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Evil sometimes its mediocre and stupid!

Evil sometimes its mediocre and stupid!

A Poem by Ammanite

Sometimes I can’t even see where I am going

How can this have happened?

Even though my parents had to start form scratch?

Why should I? I write great

 

Why did she had to come and ruin it all

Taking over of what I had and my beginnings

Now I guess I have to start again

Form a scratch because the paper that I wrote everything is my life

And thanks to her it’s now somewhere gone in the flames of fire.

© 2011 Ammanite


Author's Note

Ammanite
has anyone experienced hacking before i seen my cousin do that but i just dont think is right. my truest opinion on this!

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Would hate to count the times I've started over...each time you learn. Hacking isn't right but it exists...so you learn to protect your work..you save everything of value in many places...flash drives are cheap insurance...but no one can take what is in your heart and mind unless you give it to them....good luck...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I can really relate to your poem. I once lost a notebook which had over 200 poems, songs and short stories in it. I was bummed for a while, but the Lord blessed me with some more creativity and I began to be prolific again. I enjoyed the raw emotion of the piece and the disdain for the person who changed the direction of the main person's life. A enjoyable read for sure.
God Bless

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have recently had over 100 of my pieces stolen and published under another person's name. I was fortunate enough to have enough people familiar with my work to get the the thief stopped and the work taken down but I felt that my very soul had been ripped from my chest. I hurt for anyone that this happens to. Excellent work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hacking is impossible to stop completely. Ideas are never new, so I don't have a problem if someone borrows my concept as long as they use their own words. fire can burn paper, but not ideas. they last forever.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Would hate to count the times I've started over...each time you learn. Hacking isn't right but it exists...so you learn to protect your work..you save everything of value in many places...flash drives are cheap insurance...but no one can take what is in your heart and mind unless you give it to them....good luck...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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why should i tell you ?, is none of your business!, Peru



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