Is this love?

Is this love?

I can't tell what it was, but it was some kind of magic.

That made me bow down on my keens and forget the world around me.

So as soon I saw your eyes, everything became shadows.

As I'm lost in your darkness and your light is the only that enlightens me.

 

It's that distinctive glance on your eyes that transforms me,

from being nothing to be part of your property.

And maybe is also the sweet taste of your voice,

that paralyzes every action of my body.

 

As you sure know how to take advantage of the influence of this magic,

even when I protest you know exactly what to do to have me.

 

Since the first day I met you, I'm trapped between devotion and fear,

as they are the consequences of every reaction you give me, my dear!

 

But is until the end of the night,

when you take me by surprise and whisper the magic words.

That I realize this magic is called love.

Author's Note

Please ignore grammar problems. I am practicing...

Reviews

[PoeticGirl]

Hi CNP! I really enjoyed this poem! I'm new too, so this encourages me to be able to write and let others enjoy what I love the most! Thanks again for these wonderful lines!. Hope to see more.

[CNP]

Thanks, your words mean a lot to me! I would love to read some of your poems as well, so I will be looking for your updates!