I really liked the overall vibe of this story and I hope that you continue writing it on here because it's works like these that inspire me and help me come up with ideas for my writing :). Thank you for posting this fantastic read. I am going to try and go through the chapters again and give u a detailed and constructive review on each one when I get the chance. I'm a little busy right now, but rest assured I will be giving you some detailed reviews. Again, thanks for posting this, I really enjoyed every detail- you had me hooked after the first chapter.
Sincerely, Raysira.
P.S. I asked all of my friends to read this as well so you might be getting reviews from them. :)
I really liked the overall vibe of this story and I hope that you continue writing it on here because it's works like these that inspire me and help me come up with ideas for my writing :). Thank you for posting this fantastic read. I am going to try and go through the chapters again and give u a detailed and constructive review on each one when I get the chance. I'm a little busy right now, but rest assured I will be giving you some detailed reviews. Again, thanks for posting this, I really enjoyed every detail- you had me hooked after the first chapter.
Sincerely, Raysira.
P.S. I asked all of my friends to read this as well so you might be getting reviews from them. :)
I've been writing as a hobby for a bit over 20 years now. I have 2 fantasy novels on Amazon (my Lavender series), and am working on book 3. I have written a romance novel, Laura's Knight, which I am.. more..