When You're Around...

Finding and Falling in love.

Life is good, when you’re around, 

Life is swell, when you’re around, 

Life opens up to a new dimension, when you’re around, 

When you’re around, my life is sweeter than ever can be. 

You make my heart beat ten times faster, when you’re around,

You make me smile, when you’re around,

You make my life complete, when you’re around,

You make me happy, without any worries.

You make me feel alive and good inside, when you’re around, 

You make me feel like myself,

Like there’s nothing more to live for.

When you’re around, I feel like time stops.

I feel like an angel, when you’re around, 

I feel like I was meant for you, when you’re around, 

When I feel down, you’re there to comfort me, 

When I’m mad at someone, you’re there to hold me back,

When I’m feeling frustrated, you’re there to soothe me,

When you’re there, I feel like I was meant to live in this world with you. 

Reviews

[Kaye]

You make my heart beat ten times faster, when you’re around,
You make me smile, when you’re around,

Like these lines here, this is a really good write, enjoyed

[Ken e Bujold]

great poem Cassie, terrific rhythm and use of repetition.

A couple of thoughts: 2nd verse, last line, rather than us complete a 2nd time, you might consider x'ing the 2nd complete.
the other thought is a repetition in 2nd line of 3rd verse would work, you make me me

food for thought

great poem

ken e