Car Crash Blues

I got in a car wreck today..every 16 year olds dream. I decided to write a sonnet about it. If words end in -ed, then it should be pronounced like the name Ed. I don't know how to post accent marks

The Car Crash Blues

Crushed, Defeated, This is how i feel.

My pride smashed like the side of my car.

A scraped knee, which in time shall heal

A caged bird i have become, not very far

I can go with no vehicle to take 

me away, a caged bird i become.

I just started driving for lord Christ's sake

and man, I can say that I sure feel dumb.

My freedom now taken away from me,

My pride deflated and my ego burst.

I loved that red Chrysler you see?

Now it is busted up and it is cursed.

My head hurts but at least I am alive

I will miss the ability to drive.

Author's Note

if words end in -ed then it should be pronounced like the name Ed. I Don't know how to make accent marks.

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

I am so sorry
oh yeah this is a bummer
I am sorry you lost your car glad you are o.k. I love cars maybe it will wok out it won't be the Chrysler but maybe something else
thank you for sharing

[C.M.Ware]

Thank you for reviewing this, i actually wrote this in a concussed state. I found out my car is totaled, so my father is buying a new one and we are going to junk yards to fix the chrysler. My license will be suspended so I will have time to fix it.