Disguises

Disguises

A Poem by Chenin Marie

They call me the chameleon, I’ll be just what you want.

Once I find your weakness, I’ll hypnotize you with lust.


I can be a boa constrictor, suffocating my prey.

I’ll breathe in your breath until your insides start to fray.


They say I’m the black widow, I’ll entangle you in my web.

I’ll feed off of your feelings after a night in my bed.


I can be a venomous serpent, a few drops could kill.

Instead I’ll just rattle and have you at my will.


I am just a woman, who hasn't found her match.

So I’ll continue to drain all the victims I catch.

© 2015 Chenin Marie


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I wonder what will happen when you do find your match.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the idea of this poem. The biggest suggestion I would make on it would be to reconsider some of the consistency between what is rhymed and what is not. It felt slightly askew in some places. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


ahh..you forgot the praying mantis,lolol!:) naughty is nice but nasty is deadly! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Seductive, salacious and powerful all at the same time.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the metaphors you use and your word choices are very engaging
nice job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


the power of a woman,great write

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow, that's one powerful poem. From what I see of your picture, I'm sure most men would surrender happily. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Chenin Marie

9 Years Ago

You're sweet :) thank you and thanks for reading!
Relic

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. :D

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Added on April 8, 2015
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Chenin Marie
Chenin Marie

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