Static Soul

The concept is appealing but with these feelings we start revealing.
Ideal standards and unattainable dreams, getting drunk on the make believe.
Stepping stones along this journey, multiple connections, twisting and turning.
Unaware of the destination, enjoying time even when time is wasted.
The idea of life is just your own theory.

 Whatever you believe to help you see clearly.
Ignorance can be blissful but I'm still searching for something more mystical.
Everything is eventual but for now I'll just embrace the essence of your being.
I'll come to realize you were just a catalyst, a stepping stone in my souls journey through this intoxicating abyss.

Reviews

[SuspectGray]

The thoughts here are anything but static. Almost a rap.

[Chenin Marie]

Thanks for reading

[terry smith]

The bliss of an abyss of your own creation, a notion set in motion by the commotion that is you :) nice poem Chenin,I liked it alot!! :)