Common Collective

They define themselves with flashy cars, new technology and trendy bars. The depths of their minds are anything but deep, surface people living life while they sleep. But I refuse to give up. I refuse to give in and I find myself infatuated with their idea of sins. I don't listen to their judgement, they will always critique because they are intimidated by anything unique. They are threatened by anything different, so when I speak my mind they refuse to listen. I find myself between the planets and stars, I embrace who I am while they deny who they are.

Reviews

[terry smith]

everybody strives for average...I strive for greatness...sometimes a comet...sometimes a burning pile of flesh, but at least I try. nice writing Chenin!

[ZackOfBridge]

Captures the mind of the artist perfectly.

[Chenin Marie]

Thank you :) and thanks for reading!