Your Pledge

My mind races
A million retraces
Never slowing
Endlessly flowing
Teetering on the brink
Ready to sink
Into an abyss
Ceasing to exist
Needing a promise
Seeking solace
Not knowing
If insanity is ongoing
Then hope arrives
Making me revive
Pulled from the edge
By your pledge
'I'll leave you never,
Always and Forever'

Reviews

[leesa331]

I like how you drive the reader through your emotions. I held my breath until I got to the line "pulled from the edge". Great lines. Thank you for writing this.