My crush

An infatuation
Without cessation
A growing Obsession
From an everlasting impression
The raging passion
Full of compassion
True emotion
Forever woven
For so these are potent
It must be spoken
This overflow
Of a much needed overdose
Proves to me
That it will always be
It must
Everyday I lust
Forever in a state of blush
All because of my crush

Reviews

[Relic]

I've felt this way before and you've explained it well. It brings back painful memories in a way. Lots of times a crush turns out to be a disappointment when you discover your crush belongs to someone else.

The pace of this seems very fast to me being the lines are so short. I'll assume you want it that way.

Good poem.